April 23: What Happened to the Boy?
This is an old poem first written at the old Melic online workshop. It didn't look like this then and I've never been satisfied with it. I've given it another work over, so here it is in yet another...
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The boyhood adventures are really entertaining. This in particular made me chuckle aloud: outdrew his older brother, Black Bart, in the living room corral. This is great!: Alone, he swam the English...
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Yes, the boyhood adventures are so wonderfully drawn. Makes me want that boy around, just to watch what he does next! The end is very sad . . . where does the adventure and daring and imagination go,...
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Most enjoyable. The title and the S1 threw me off at first - I thought it was headed somewhere else. The ending could be me. I'm glad I have such things as NaPoWriMo to keep me mentally alive....
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Slayed is also used as the past tense of slay — most often in the sense of having been amused. ("He slayed me by showing up with six dozen roses.") But is still okay for killing.
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Wonderful and believable details of a young boy who grows up to be just like the rest of us tired adults. Yes, it's easy to wonder where all those dreams went to. A very enjoyable poem.
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This is great! Love the ending. Reminder: Subs wanted for Tell-Tale Inklings first issue.
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